Although this is just a draft, make sure to give your reviewee useful feedback that can help him/her before he/she goes on to write the final version of his/her paper. At this point, it would be most useful to make sure that the paper has a thesis and follows the grading criteria (see earlier post if you lost yours). These questions are designed to touch on most of them.
Name of Reviewee:
Does the piece have an effective title?
Does the piece use first-person pronouns (I, me, my)?
Does the piece have a logical form of organization?
Does the piece have a thesis? What is it?
What is one thing that you like about the paper?
What is one thing that you find confusing/think needs editing before the final draft?